3、斜体n暗示“正”。
[要害词]医药论文英文摘要
1、zhixueting应为“止血停”而非“出血停”，自相抵牾。“出血停”也可译为hemorrhage-stopping，以利便海外读者领略。
2、school可作“（大学里的）院”解，原意是“药学院”，而非“药理教研室”，故改之。
2、体例编制：本文凭据原文、批改、点评序次编写；修改、插入处以黑体斜体，删节处附括号说明，如有点评附上标数字注明。
原文：DeterminationofGallicAcidinZhixuetingLiquidsbyTLCScanningZHOUQun1,XULa-ying2(1.DepartmentofPharmacology,TongjiMedicalCollege,HuazhongUniversityofScienceandTechnology,Wuhan430030,China;2.TheFacultyofPharmacy,HubeiCollegeofTraditionalChineseMedicine,Wuhan430061,China)ABSTRACTObjective:TodeterminethecontentofgallicacidinZhixuetingliquids.Methods:Zhixuetingliquidsweredissolvedbydistilledwater,andthenextractedintothesamplewithbutanaletc.ThesamplesweredeterminatedbyTLCscanning(λS=280nm,λR=350nm).Result:Theaveragerecoveryratewas96.36%andRSD=2.39%.Thecontentsofgallicacidin3fivebatchesofsampleswere0.38,0.42and0.47mg/ml.Conclusion:Themethodissimple,convenientandavailable.KEYWORDSTLCScanning;Zhixuetingliquids;Determination;Gallicacid.DeterminationofGallicAcidinChuxueting1oralLiquidsbyTLCScanningZHOUQun1,XULa-ying2(1.SchoolofPharmacy2,TongjiMedicalCollege,HuazhongUniversityofScienceandTechnology,Wuhan430030,China;2.TheFacultyofPharmacy,HubeiCollegeofTraditionalChineseMedicine,Wuhan430061,China)AbstractObjective:TodeterminethecontentofgallicacidinChuxuetingoralLiquids.Methods:TheChuxuetingoralLiquidwasdissolvedindistilledwater,andthenextracted(intothesample删去)withwatersaturalednbutanol3etc.forthepreparationofsamples.ThesamplesweresubjectedtogallicaciddeterminationbyTLCscanning(λS=280nm,λR=350nm).Results:Theaveragerateofrecoverywas96.36%,(and删去)RSD=2.39%.Thecontentsofgallicacidin3(five删去)batchesofsampleswere0.38,0.42and0.47mg/mlrespectively.Conclusion:Themethodissimple,convenientandfeasible.KEYWORDSTLCScanning;ChuxuetingoralLiquids;Determination;Gallicacid点评：
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